Pictured above is the feedback notes given to me be an anonymous YR13 student, I found these very helpful due to the fact that they went through the same not long before. Therefore they were able to pick up on things that I wouldn’t be able to identify. From these notes I have analysed the good and the bad by highlighting the differing ones and then correcting what the YR13 student thought was unfavourable or just needed to be added to make my pieces have a better appeal to my target audience.